The Great Wall
Florence C
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November was my birthday. I got a lot of presents from my friends and parents. One of them was a
big box, I don’t know whom gave it to me.
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When I opened it, I found a carpet and a key inside. The carpet was printed with a cute dragon
ern. I took out the key and put it on the table. I sat on the carpet and did my General Studies
ework. I had to search some information about The Great Wall.
Suddenly, the key was glowing and the carpet started flying. It carried me to The Great Wall. I met a
friendly dragon called Alex. It was green and it had sharp teeth. It told me there was a magic school and I could
learn magic there. Also, there was a terrible monster living near The Great Wall
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I liked learning magic. It was a great chance for me. I went to the magic school and learned a lot of magic.
One day, when I was practising my magic around the school. I saw a King. He was crying on The Great
Wall. “The monster caught my son. Can you help me?” he asked. “Sure !” I replied. I followed the King and
used magic to find his son in The Great Wall’s secret basement. They were very happy and thanked me for my
help. “The monster will hurt a lot of people when it wakes up,” the prince said. “Let me help you to take it
away,” I said.
I walked and walked around the Great Wall. I found the monster which was sleeping under the tree. The
monster was so big. I didn’t have any idea on how to take care of it. Suddenly, the key glew again and it created
a magic room, which could keep the bad animals inside and they could not go away. I moved the monster
slowly and used magic to push it into a magic room. After moving that monster, the King gave me a horse. “It
can bring you back home,” the King said. “Thank you, I have to go home now,” I said.
When I sat on the horse, I saw it was growing a pair of wings. It carried me flying across the clouds and
rainbow. It brought me home within a minute.
When I got back home, I heard someone shouting. “Florence, don’t play with your toy horse. You have a
test tomorrow! ” But I ignored it and continued playing with my brother.
During the test, I used magic and got full marks in the test. I felt very happy. Suddenly, “Wake up! Wake
Up. It’s time to have a dinner!” Mum shouted. Oh! It was a dream.
I didn’t have a magic carpet. I didn’t have a magic key. I didn’t know how to use magic to get full marks in
the test. I had to work hard for my test.
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